FOURTH GRADE TRAINING GUIDE

1994 Reading Rubric - Fourth Grade - Item 3

Passage Title: "What Stars Are Like"


FORM F

3. Why do you think the creatures left? Explain your answer.

ITEM SCORE SCALE

Answer is unresponsive, unrelated, or inappropriate.
Answer gives a logical explanation of why the creatures left. The explanaton is sparse, confusing or literal. (e.g., Stars are supposed to be in the sky.)
Answer gives a logical explanation of why the creatures left. The explanation references the story and is brief or has minor errors.
Answer gives a logical explanation of why the creatures left. The response specifically references the story and is clear and developed.


THE STORY -- WHAT STARS ARE LIKE

The Cherokee held various beliefs about the stars. Some believed that the stars were great balls of light. Others said they were human beings who lived in Sky Country. In some circumstances, stars in animal form could be approached by humans. This story describes one such encounter, which helps explain the nature of stars.

WHAT STARS ARE LIKE

Late one night a Cherokee hunting party sat around their mountain camp. They noticed two lights moving along near the top of a distant mountain ridge. They watched until the lights disappeared.

The next two nights they again watched the bright lights on the same mountain ridge. This was a wonder. No one had ever seen anything like it before. After discussing for some time what these lights could be, they decided to investigate.

The next morning they set out for the distant ridge. Arriving at the place, they searched and searched for the source the lights. They saw no lights, but, after looking for some time, they finally found two large, furry creatures about as big as two outstretched arms. The creatures had tiny heads, and when the wind blew, their fur parted to show downy feathers from which sparks flew.

The men were delighted with these strange beings and decided to take them back to camp. They kept them for several days and noticed how tame and docile the creatures were. Every night they shone bright like stars. When daylight approached, they turned into dull balls of gray fur, except when a gust of wind stirred their feathers. Then their sparks flew.

None of the men thought the creatures might try to escape, so no one was prepared for what happened on the seventh night. As the men busied themselves with their tasks, the odd creatures began to rise from the ground. Soon they were bright, shining balls above the tops of the highest trees. Higher and higher they went until they were just two glowing spots in the night sky.

That is how the hunters knew they had captured two stars.

"What Stars are Like" from They Dance in the Sky. by Jean G. Monroe and Ray A. Williamson. Copyright 1987 by Jean Guard Monroe and Ray A. Williamson. Reprinted by permission of Houghton Mifflin Company. All rights reserved.


Study the following question and student responses and decide for yourself the student's score (0-3) based on the grading rubric provided above. Then briefly print out this page, use the lined spaces below and indicate why you chose this score, including what the student should have and should not have included in their answer. When you have completed this part, choose the answer section to compare your results with the state scorers. 

STUDENT RESPONSES

QUESTION

3. Why do you think the creatures left? Explain your answer.


STUDENT RESPONSE NUMBER ONE

They were dead

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STUDENT RESPONSE NUMBER TWO

They burneded up

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STUDENT RESPONSE NUMBER THREE

Because they were home sick and they didn't like being out of the sky. They may have missed the parents.

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STUDENT RESPONSE NUMBER FOUR

They were stars and they belong in the sky.

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STUDENT RESPONSE NUMBER FIVE

Because they missed being in the sky with others. It was just like missing your friends plus they wanted to be free like a wild animal. They might not have liked it there or might not have even been stars

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STUDENT RESPONSE NUMBER SIX

The stars left because they wanted to be free. Stare are supost to be brite in the sky. The stars wated u;ntil the hunters were busy and they got redy to excape. They left fast and went abov the tallest trees and were safe again.

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STUDENT RESPONSE NUMBER SEVEN

The creatures left the Cherokee camp, because they were really stars and didnot belong on the ground. They could not stay on the ground because they needed to return to their places in space so they could shine again and help to light up the sky at night. The indidans didn't have the power to keep them on the ground.

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