1994 Reading Rubric - Fourth Grade - Item 3: Answers

Passage Title: "What Stars Are Like"


FORM F

3. Why do you think the creatures left? Explain your answer.

ITEM SCORE SCALE

0 Answer is unresponsive, unrelated, or inappropriate.
1 Answer gives a logical explanation of why the creatures left. The explanaton is sparse, confusing or literal. (e.g., Stars are supposed to be in the sky.)
2 Answer gives a logical explanation of why the creatures left. The explanation references the story and is brief or has minor errors.
3 Answer gives a logical explanation of why the creatures left. The response specifically references the story and is clear and developed.


STUDENT RESPONSES

QUESTION

3. Why do you think the creatures left? Explain your answer.


STUDENT RESPONSE NUMBER ONE

They were dead

RUBRIC SCORING

0 -- Inappropriate response.


STUDENT RESPONSE NUMBER TWO

They burneded up

RUBRIC SCORING

0 -- Inappropriate answer.


STUDENT RESPONSE NUMBER THREE

Because they were home sick and they didn't like being out of the sky. They may have missed the parents.

RUBRIC SCORING

1 -- Answer provides a logical explanation (based on the legend) of why the creatures left. The explanation is too sparse for a higher score.


STUDENT RESPONSE NUMBER FOUR

They were stars and they belong in the sky.

RUBRIC SCORING

1 -- Answer provides a logical explanation of why the creatures left. It is too sparse for a higher score.


STUDENT RESPONSE NUMBER FIVE

Because they missed being in the sky with others. It was just like missing your friends plus they wanted to be free like a wild animal. They might not have liked it there or might not have even been stars

RUBRIC SCORING

2 -- Answer provides a logical explanation (based on the legend) of why the creatures left. The explanation references the story (". . . missed being in the sky with others . . . free like a wild animal . . .") but is too brief for a higher score.


STUDENT RESPONSE NUMBER SIX

The stars left because they wanted to be free. Stare are supost to be brite in the sky. The stars wated u;ntil the hunters were busy and they got redy to excape. They left fast and went abov the tallest trees and were safe again.

RUBRIC SCORING

2 -- Answer provides a logical explanation (based on the legend) of why the creatures left. The explanation references the story (". . . wanted to be free. . . . wated until the hunters were busy . . .") but is too brief for a higher score.


STUDENT RESPONSE NUMBER SEVEN

The creatures left the Cherokee camp, because they were really stars and didnot belong on the ground. They could not stay on the ground because they needed to return to their places in space so they could shine again and help to light up the sky at night. The indidans didn't have the power to keep them on the ground.

RUBRIC SCORING

3 -- Answer provides a logical explanation (based on the legend) of why the creatures left. The explanation (". . . they were really stars . . . needed to return to their places in space. . . . the indians didn't have the power . . .) is clear and developed.