FOURTH GRADE TRAINING GUIDE

1994 Reading Rubric - Fourth Grade - Item 2

Passage Title: "What Stars Are Like"


FORM F

2. Do you think the hunters really captured the stars? Explain why or why not.

ITEM SCORE SCALE

Answer is unresponsive, unrelated, or inappropriate. It may state whether or not the hunters really captured the stars but fails to give an explanation.
Answer states whether or not the hunters really captuedte stars. The explanation provided is sparse, confusing, or literal and may contain summary. (e.g., I know the hunters did not capture the stars because stars are far away and no one can capture them.
Answer states whether or not the hunters really captured the stars. The explanation provided references the story but is brief or has minor errors.
Answer states whether or not the hunters really captured the stars. The explanation provided specifically references to the story and is clear and developed.


THE STORY -- WHAT STARS ARE LIKE

The Cherokee held various beliefs about the stars. Some believed that the stars were great balls of light. Others said they were human beings who lived in Sky Country. In some circumstances, stars in animal form could be approached by humans. This story describes one such encounter, which helps explain the nature of stars.

WHAT STARS ARE LIKE

Late one night a Cherokee hunting party sat around their mountain camp. They noticed two lights moving along near the top of a distant mountain ridge. They watched until the lights disappeared.

The next two nights they again watched the bright lights on the same mountain ridge. This was a wonder. No one had ever seen anything like it before. After discussing for some time what these lights could be, they decided to investigate.

The next morning they set out for the distant ridge. Arriving at the place, they searched and searched for the source the lights. They saw no lights, but, after looking for some time, they finally found two large, furry creatures about as big as two outstretched arms. The creatures had tiny heads, and when the wind blew, their fur parted to show downy feathers from which sparks flew.

The men were delighted with these strange beings and decided to take them back to camp. They kept them for several days and noticed how tame and docile the creatures were. Every night they shone bright like stars. When daylight approached, they turned into dull balls of gray fur, except when a gust of wind stirred their feathers. Then their sparks flew.

None of the men thought the creatures might try to escape, so no one was prepared for what happened on the seventh night. As the men busied themselves with their tasks, the odd creatures began to rise from the ground. Soon they were bright, shining balls above the tops of the highest trees. Higher and higher they went until they were just two glowing spots in the night sky.

That is how the hunters knew they had captured two stars.

"What Stars are Like" from They Dance in the Sky. by Jean G. Monroe and Ray A. Williamson. Copyright 1987 by Jean Guard Monroe and Ray A. Williamson. Reprinted by permission of Houghton Mifflin Company. All rights reserved.


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STUDENT RESPONSES

QUESTION

2. Don you think the hunters really captured the stars? Explain why or why not.


STUDENT RESPONSE NUMBER ONE

because he wanted to.

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STUDENT RESPONSE NUMBER TWO

No. They took them to the villag-
e and kept them there.

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STUDENT RESPONSE NUMBER THREE

They did not capture the stars because no one can reach the stars.

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STUDENT RESPONSE NUMBER FOUR

No. The legend is a story that isn't tru. The Cherokees Made up a story about stars and what they are.

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STUDENT RESPONSE NUMBER FIVE

I think they did not capture a star because it sounds so fake. The Cherokees were just trying to explain something in nature they did not understand. they noticed two lights moving on the mountain and thout they was stars

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STUDENT RESPONSE NUMBER SIX

No. Because you cant capture a star. It is a big ball of gas. The Cherokee indians didnt know anything about stars but they tried to talk about them. So they made up a legend that made stars seem like animals. they said the animals spark.

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STUDENT RESPONSE NUMBER SEVEN

The hunters didn't really capture the stars because stars are in space, not on mountain ridges. Stars are planets or little suns that are too far away to reach. The Cherokees didn't know that so they made up a story to explain what stars are. They said they were animals because they knew about animals from real life and they gave the animals thing to do like stars do like shine and rise above trees.

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