FOURTH GRADE TRAINING GUIDE

1994 Reading Rubric - Fourth Grade

Passage Title: "What Stars Are Like"


FORM F

1. What would you have done if you had captured these two strange creatures? Explain your answer.

ITEM SCORE SCALE

Answer is unresponsive, unrelated, or inappropriate.
Answer states what the student would have done if he or she had captured the two strange creatures. The explanation, if present, is sparse, confusing or literal. (e.g., I would have them for pets and play with them.)
Answer states what the student would have done if he or she had captured the two strange creatures. The explanation references the story but is brief or has minor errors.
Answer states what the student would have done if he or she had captured the two strange creatures. The explanation specifically references the story and is clear and developed.


THE STORY -- WHAT STARS ARE LIKE

The Cherokee held various beliefs about the stars. Some believed that the stars were great balls of light. Others said they were human beings who lived in Sky Country. In some circumstances, stars in animal form could be approached by humans. This story describes one such encounter, which helps explain the nature of stars.

WHAT STARS ARE LIKE

Late one night a Cherokee hunting party sat around their mountain camp. They noticed two lights moving along near the top of a distant mountain ridge. They watched until the lights disappeared.

The next two nights they again watched the bright lights on the same mountain ridge. This was a wonder. No one had ever seen anything like it before. After discussing for some time what these lights could be, they decided to investigate.

The next morning they set out for the distant ridge. Arriving at the place, they searched and searched for the source the lights. They saw no lights, but, after looking for some time, they finally found two large, furry creatures about as big as two outstretched arms. The creatures had tiny heads, and when the wind blew, their fur parted to show downy feathers from which sparks flew.

The men were delighted with these strange beings and decided to take them back to camp. They kept them for several days and noticed how tame and docile the creatures were. Every night they shone bright like stars. When daylight approached, they turned into dull balls of gray fur, except when a gust of wind stirred their feathers. Then their sparks flew.

None of the men thought the creatures might try to escape, so no one was prepared for what happened on the seventh night. As the men busied themselves with their tasks, the odd creatures began to rise from the ground. Soon they were bright, shining balls above the tops of the highest trees. Higher and higher they went until they were just two glowing spots in the night sky.

That is how the hunters knew they had captured two stars.

"What Stars are Like" from They Dance in the Sky. by Jean G. Monroe and Ray A. Williamson. Copyright 1987 by Jean Guard Monroe and Ray A. Williamson. Reprinted by permission of Houghton Mifflin Company. All rights reserved.


Study the following question and student responses and decide for yourself the student's score (0-3) based on the grading rubric provided above. Then briefly print out this page, use the lined spaces below and indicate why you chose this score, including what the student should have and should not have included in their answer. When you have completed this part, choose the answer section to compare your results with the state scorers.


STUDENT RESPONSES

QUESTION

1. What would you have done if you had captured these two strange creatures? Explain your answer.


STUDENT RESPONSE NUMBER ONE

Late one night a cherokee hunting party sat around their mountain camp.

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STUDENT RESPONSE NUMBER TWO

The creatures had tiny heads.

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STUDENT RESPONSE NUMBER THREE

I would have went home and never come back to that mountain again or I could run from the creatures and I could have killed them

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STUDENT RESPONSE NUMBER FOUR

I would have taken them back to the village and put them in cages so they wouldn't escape.

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STUDENT RESPONSE NUMBER FIVE

I would call the vet and get him to check out the creatures and make sure they arent sick. If they are I would buy them medicine. Then I would let them go and tell them to come back and see me when they want to. I don't think the hunters were right about keeping them.

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STUDENT RESPONSE NUMBER SIX

I would take pictures of them and show them to my teacher. Then I would let them go and be free so they can shine and be pretty at night. I dont think they should be kept captured. If the sparks that they have in there fur and feathers hurt them I will try to keep the wind from blowing on them. I will take them back to the mountain ridge so they can shine at night and be happy stars.

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